Applying Feedback

Publish Online

I was patricianly pleased with the feedback I got in this critique. The response was largely positive and I felt proud of what I had achieved. I received some recommendations of adjustments to make in order to improve the outcome. These were:

  1. BRINGING THE ‘TAKE OFF’ MORE INTO FRAME TO MAKE THE SECOND ‘F’ LOOK MORE LEGIBLE

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  1. BRINGING SPACE SHUTTLES INTO FRAME

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  1. ADDING A TITLE TO THIS PAGE

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Feedback from peers

Feedback from peers

<aside> ⭐ REFLECTION: I feel very positive after this critique, mainly because there was not a huge amount to change. It is quite a scary thing putting your work up for all to see, but it is also a very positive thing. It allows you to get many perspectives on your project and strengthens the over all outcome. I’m very confident submitting this piece as I spent a lot of time ensuring it is the most developed it can be.

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